Now off to the proof reader Ashley Davis. (Not a relative, I'm a pen name)
She now has a site page as well to show herself.
So far I like what she has shown for catching my mistakes. Next week I'll be working with her to get the book to better specs than what is online.
To reiterate, this is a polished version of the book. The story remains the same, but there will be dialog improvements as well as corrections of grammatical errors that has bothered many readers.